Feedback from teacher

This is a good blog. In particular your storyboard and the description under each shot is clear and communicates your idea well. What you need to add now are lists such as locations, props, equipment list, actors etc. - practicalities of filming. I know some of this is on the call sheet but it should be in more depth on your blog. It does not seem that you are producing a lot of blog work from home - make sure you do this and tag your name correctly. Keep going - this is looking great.